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Struppi

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heyho !
hier gibts doch bestimmt den ein oder anderen textschreiberling und songwriter, also dachte ich mir man könnte ja mal den einen oder anderen bassicer-text posten [:-)]

ich mach mal den anfang mit zwei meiner songs.

der erste heißt "loaded" und handelt von einem meiner freunde, der als sein elternhaus vor einigen jahren buchstäblich zusammenstürzte in wenigen monaten den abstieg von einem durchschnittlich bis gutem gymnasiasten zu einem schlechten hauptschul-abschluss geschafft hat [ooo]
hauptverantwortlich dafür war sein plötzliches interesse an alkohol, gras und pillen, um es kurz zu machen ich hab einige schreckliche momente mit ihm erlebt und ihn zwei mal ins krankenhaus befördern müssen [xx(]
der text ist bewusst zweigeteilt, in den strophen schildere ich sozusagen seine persönliche ansicht, sein fliehen-wollen in rauschzustände.
im c-teil wirds dann recht kritisch ...

Zitat:
LOADED

found a way to leave the shadows
steppin' out into the light
slip into a dream world
look the stars are shining bright
got no use for all your morals
or for reality
just taste the illusion
yeah, it's so f***in' sweet


give the money to that strange guy
don't you know it's do or die
you just get what you pay for
sell your life and free your mind
you better take it easy
ridin' for a fall
take what you can get
and I got to have it all


gettin' out
outta my mind
gettin' loaded, gettin' high
gettin' out
leave everything behind
staggerin' loaded through my life

I'll be alright
yeah, I'm doin' fine

all my life and all the time
the stories they used to tell
didn't teach me anything
didn't frighten me to hell
so I'm still searchin' for a way out
sinkin' in a lovely haze
steppin' outta the time
steppin outta this f***in' place
yeah it's so easy to leave it
so easy to close your eyes
when you're losing your head
and blowin' up your f***in' mind
it's so easy not to worry
when you're actin' like a fool
it's so easy not to bother
when you ain't got shit to lose

gettin' out
outta my mind
gettin' loaded, gettin' high
gettin' out
leave everything behind
staggerin' loaded through my life

I'll be alright
yeah, I'm doin' fine

I'll be alright
yeah, I'm doin' fine

der zweite text den ich vorstellen möchte ist ein song der mir persönlich extrem wichtig ist.
ich denke der titel sagt schon fast alles, es geht um eine dame die mir selbst nach fast zwei jahren noch sehr wichtig ist.
anhören kann man den song übrigens hier

Zitat:
STILL LOVE YOU BITCH

fell back to earth, into reality
crashed on the ground, it meant nothing to me
they used to tell me but I used to doubt
to fall in love means to hit the ground
cut my skin, cut it right to the bone
leave a scar just to show
that wounds may heal but all pain holds on
feels like the end of an endless song


you don’t care for broken hearts
you don’t care if I fall apart
sit right back to watch me slip
but I still love you BITCH


endless days and sleepless nights
wish you would still be walkin by my side
close my eyes, feel like missin’ you
hope sometimes you miss me too
I don't care, nothing matters anymore
been down the abyss too many times before
bet if I’m gone you delete all memories
but the more I try the worse I feel


you don’t care for broken hearts
you don’t care if I fall apart
sit right back to watch me slip
but I still love you BITCH


seems I been foolin’ myself when I thought you’d need me
seems I been foolin myself when I thought you would care
yes I been fooling myself all the time I was believing
fooling myself all the time I stood there for you


you don’t care for broken hearts
you don’t care if I fall apart
sit right back to watch me slip
but I still love you BITCH
 
Es ist immer schwierig mit eigenen Texten, so ganz ohne Musik.
Manchmal bedeutet ein bestimmter Text einem sehr viel, aber als aussenstehende Person kann man das zumeist nicht nachvollziehen.

Aber was solls. [:-)]
Hier ein Text, den ich vor fünf Jahren verfasst habe.

-when the sky is grey
and you're feeling low
senceless today
and tomorrow

have you thought about
whats gonna be
or do you drift now down into
your own reality


-when the night is cold
and your heart is too
don't fade away
just stand it through

did you know there's hope
for the humanity
or are you overwhelmed now by
your own sad destiny


-maybe you should think
of trees and birds
imagine happiness
and forget your hurts

everybody's down
sometimes, you see
that you're living in a
selfmade misery


-but you can leave
all your worries behind
you can leave
all those troubles behind
and if you need
to start over again
and run away
far away
it's ok
far away


-there will be a time
that you can laugh again
and no reasons for that
you can't stand

so keep your head up and
smile at me
and forget the way
that it used to be


-but you can leave
all your worries behind
you can leave
all those troubles behind
and if you need
to start over again
and run away
far away
it's ok
far away
 

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